G-KP3QV8NB0Q

The Sensor

It takes not more than a quarter of an hour to walk down to hotel Ultima from that crowded station. As I gathered pace, the surroundings darkened. Soon the pitter-pattering commenced and sooner yet, it gave way to what we call ‘cats-and-dogs’. I got drenched to the skin, and my trolley bag bathed in the rain. The autorickshaws were loaded with people and it was no use hitch-hiking in that weather. So, I preferred walking.

As I signed the ‘check-in’ book, my wet palm dampened a portion of the page. Collecting the keys, I followed the attendant who ushered me into room number 113. I dried up myself, had a cup of cappuccino, and moved on to slide the curtains and open the windows. It was drizzling now. But now and then, a streak of lightning cut its way through the cumulonimbus clouds, illuminating the sky and alleviating the roaring thunder.

I began reading ‘It’, Stephen King’s bestseller. My phone vibrated. A spam message. It vibrated again. Another spam. Right above the Home button where it shows ‘Swipe to unlock’, it is now showing ‘No match’. What a fool this smartphone is! I never even put my finger on the sensor!

The telephone rang.

“You shall be coming down for dinner sir? Or shall we…”

“No, I’m coming,” I interrupted. I am not an old man with gouts that I can’t climb down the stairs.

As I dipped the spoon in the soup, my phone vibrated again. ‘Make sure your finger covers the entire sensor’ read the message above the Home button. Did this phone catch a cold after the rain? But I had put it in my trolley just as the rain had gathered momentum. Must be getting old…

The night was cold. I had to use both the blankets they had kept ready. Switching off my phone to prevent it from ‘sensing’ through my sleep, I covered my head under the pillow, only to get suffocated and lie down properly again.

I woke up at a low yet dreadful sound. Anklet bells. Someone on the top floor must be dancing in the… wait, this is the top floor itself! So, someone’s dancing on the terrace? Some Manjulika, betrayed by her love? Why would she choose this luxurious hotel anyway? I felt a little lump in my throat. Yet, I went out, and up the stairs, gradually gathering both courage and momentum. She… or he, whoever it is up there must be told that I hate sleep disturbances.

There is no one up on the terrace. I have searched through and through: behind the tank, under the shed. I even looked down the edge to see if that phantom had chosen to commit suicide with its dance being ignored. But no, there’s no sign of anyone. An icy drop of water fell on my cheek. I shivered. Am I possessed? Or is it just a raindrop? Yes, it is raining again. I rushed inside and down the staircase. There was no necessity to rush and I don’t know why I did so— whether out of fear of getting wet or for something or someone else.

I went to my room, bolted the door, and fell asleep right away.

Next morning, as the telephone rang, I jerked up from bed.

“Morning sir, shall we…”

“Am coming,” I replied and then coughed to clear my voice, putting the receiver down. My voice has become a bit heavy. It doesn’t seem like my real voice even. I have watched half a dozen movies about possession. No, I am not thinking about that any longer.

Everything seems so ghastly: remove the 1 from 113 and it becomes 13, the haunted room, then there are those anklet bells, my mysterious change in voice, and the rains. A perfect horror scenario. I have consoled myself over my voice change, maybe it’s because of the cold.

I was pondering on this issue once. My astrologer has confirmed that I would die a normal death. No spirits possessing me. Well, in this grim atmosphere, death due to a mischievous ghost inside me will be a ‘normal death’, no doubt. I heard a faintly familiar sound. The anklet bells! I looked at my ankles. No, I’m not wearing them. So, the ghost isn’t inside me?

I jumped up from the bed, clapped my hands loudly, and laughed with joy. But the bells were heard again. I stopped prancing and opened the door.

“She’ll break those cradle bells now,” my next-door neighbor shouted aloud.

I stood still for a moment and then rushed into my room. Banging the door close, I pranced again. I am me, myself. My voice sounds familiar now again.

The phone vibrated. ‘Wipe your fingerprint sensor and try again. I am wondering now…

About the Author

Roshmi Dasgupta
 Roshmi Dasgupta

Roshmi Dasgupta is a tenth grade student at Mansur Habibullah Memorial School, Kolkata. Creative writing is her passion, and her challenge, she feels, is to bring out real-life instances through fiction in a way that they could be visualized. She loves reading and wishes to own a huge library in future. She also has a penchant for exploring astronomy.

About the Author

464 thoughts on “The Sensor

  1. Great goods from you, man. I’ve take into account your stuff previous to and you are simply extremely magnificent. I actually like what you’ve received right here, certainly like what you are stating and the best way through which you are saying it. You make it enjoyable and you continue to take care of to stay it sensible. I cant wait to learn much more from you. This is actually a tremendous site.

  2. Greetings! Very helpful advice in this particular article! It is the little changes that produce the most significant changes. Thanks for sharing!

  3. I’m usually to blogging and i really admire your content. The article has actually peaks my interest. I’m going to bookmark your website and hold checking for new information.

  4. I’m impressed, I must say. Seldom do I encounter a blog that’s both equally educative and entertaining, and let me tell you, you’ve hit the nail on the head. The issue is something that too few folks are speaking intelligently about. I am very happy that I stumbled across this in my hunt for something relating to this.

  5. A person necessarily help to make significantly articles I’d state. This is the first time I frequented your web page and to this point? I surprised with the research you made to make this actual publish amazing. Fantastic activity!

  6. Hi, I think your site might be having browser compatibility issues. When I look at your blog in Firefox, it looks fine but when opening in Internet Explorer, it has some overlapping. I just wanted to give you a quick heads up! Other then that, very good blog!

  7. The next time I learn a weblog, I hope that it doesnt disappoint me as a lot as this one. I imply, I do know it was my option to learn, however I actually thought youd have one thing interesting to say. All I hear is a bunch of whining about one thing that you could fix for those who werent too busy in search of attention.

  8. Hi! Someone in my Myspace group shared this website with us so I came to take a look. I’m definitely enjoying the information. I’m book-marking and will be tweeting this to my followers! Great blog and great design.

  9. An attention-grabbing dialogue is value comment. I think that you need to write extra on this subject, it won’t be a taboo subject however typically individuals are not enough to talk on such topics. To the next. Cheers

  10. Hey, I think your blog might be having browser compatibility issues. When I look at your blog site in Chrome, it looks fine but when opening in Internet Explorer, it has some overlapping. I just wanted to give you a quick heads up! Other then that, very good blog!

  11. Hello! I could have sworn I’ve visited this web site before but after going through a few of the posts I realized it’s new to me. Nonetheless, I’m definitely pleased I came across it and I’ll be bookmarking it and checking back often.

  12. Wow that was unusual. I just wrote an really long comment but after I clicked submit my comment didn’t appear. Grrrr… well I’m not writing all that over again. Regardless, just wanted to say superb blog!

  13. A different issue is that video gaming became one of the all-time main forms of excitement for people of nearly every age. Kids have fun with video games, plus adults do, too. Your XBox 360 is one of the favorite games systems for folks who love to have a lot of video games available to them, and also who like to learn live with some others all over the world. Many thanks for sharing your opinions.

  14. A fascinating discussion is worth comment. I believe that you should write more on this topic, it may not be a taboo matter but typically people do not talk about such issues. To the next! Many thanks!

  15. I have been browsing online more than 3 hours today, yet I never found any interesting article like yours. It?s pretty worth enough for me. In my opinion, if all web owners and bloggers made good content as you did, the net will be much more useful than ever before.

  16. Hello, I do believe your website could possibly be having browser compatibility issues. When I look at your site in Safari, it looks fine however, when opening in I.E., it has some overlapping issues. I merely wanted to give you a quick heads up! Besides that, wonderful site.

  17. Heya i am for the first time here. I found this board and I find It really useful & it helped me out a lot. I hope to give something back and aid others like you aided me.

  18. An outstanding share! I have just forwarded this onto a co-worker who was conducting a little homework on this. And he in fact bought me breakfast simply because I discovered it for him… lol. So let me reword this…. Thanks for the meal!! But yeah, thanx for spending time to talk about this matter here on your site.

  19. Thanks for the a new challenge you have unveiled in your short article. One thing I want to comment on is that FSBO associations are built after some time. By presenting yourself to the owners the first weekend their FSBO is actually announced, ahead of masses get started calling on Thursday, you create a good relationship. By sending them tools, educational resources, free reviews, and forms, you become a strong ally. By using a personal interest in them in addition to their circumstances, you make a solid link that, oftentimes, pays off when the owners decide to go with a broker they know plus trust – preferably you actually.

  20. The next time I read a blog, I hope that it doesnt disappoint me as much as this one. I mean, I do know it was my option to read, however I really thought youd have one thing interesting to say. All I hear is a bunch of whining about something that you could repair in the event you werent too busy on the lookout for attention.

  21. Thanks for this excellent article. Yet another thing to mention is that a lot of digital cameras arrive equipped with a zoom lens so that more or less of your scene for being included through ‘zooming’ in and out. These kinds of changes in {focus|focusing|concentration|target|the a**** length are usually reflected within the viewfinder and on significant display screen on the back of your camera.

  22. Hi, i feel that i noticed you visited my website thus i got here to ?return the prefer?.I’m attempting to to find issues to improve my web site!I suppose its adequate to make use of some of your ideas!!

  23. Fantastic website. A lot of useful information here. I?m sending it to a few friends ans also sharing in delicious. And of course, thanks for your effort!

  24. Howdy! This post could not be written much better! Looking at this article reminds me of my previous roommate! He constantly kept preaching about this. I will forward this post to him. Fairly certain he will have a great read. I appreciate you for sharing!

  25. I used to be suggested this web site by way of my cousin. I am no longer positive whether or not this publish is written through him as no one else recognise such specified approximately my trouble. You’re wonderful! Thanks!

  26. Hmm it seems like your blog ate my first comment (it was extremely long) so I guess I’ll just sum it up what I submitted and say, I’m thoroughly enjoying your blog. I as well am an aspiring blog writer but I’m still new to the whole thing. Do you have any recommendations for rookie blog writers? I’d genuinely appreciate it.

  27. The very next time I read a blog, I hope that it won’t disappoint me just as much as this particular one. I mean, I know it was my choice to read through, however I actually thought you’d have something helpful to talk about. All I hear is a bunch of complaining about something that you could possibly fix if you weren’t too busy seeking attention.

  28. Thanks a bunch for sharing this with all people you really realize what you’re speaking about! Bookmarked. Kindly additionally discuss with my site =). We could have a link exchange agreement among us!

  29. Good post. I learn something new and challenging on blogs I stumbleupon every day. It will always be interesting to read articles from other writers and use a little something from their web sites.

Comments are closed.

You may also like these